Tuesday, April 10, 2007

My Girl

Your voice is chime, Smile sweeter than honey;
Like a drizzle on a day, which is still so sunny;
Your hair is dark as if robbed of light,
To stand before you needs courage of a knight;

When you dress in apparel with a veil that is green,
You appear to be the damsel, enlightening the scene;
You are like a star when only one in the sky,
Whose beauty is enough to make the cupid shy;

Your persona is awesome and looks so dishing,
You appear to be the damsel whom God is also missing;
The stroll of a queen resembles your walk,
With the multitude waiting and dying to talk;

“Who’s this girl with such divine gait?
One look of hers can change one's fate”.
Tranquility of moon and glory of sun,
Like fire and water woven into one;

With the gale, your hair plays the maze,
To entrap the manly hearts with ease;
You don’t know yourself but I can say,
Your looks have the caliber to stop a fray;

A soul parallel to yours is impossible to find,
With a body so tender yet strong in the mind;
When I behold you I have my senses gone,
You are fairer than the paper I am writing upon;

When am near you, I do perspire,
You take away my breathe I can’t respire;
Like an orchard full of flowers and a pond so deep,
You embellish my dreams when I am asleep;

The world seeks you and I also seek,
I wont give up as I am not weak;
I will wait for you in this endless queue,
My words end here but my feelings continue...........

13 comments:

Dreamer said...

gud 1....but i guess ur blog is going un-noticed....i m thinking of posting the same blog under my profile.......looking forward for ur permission

sushantam said...

Such an act will lead to an infringement of copyright act and you may be tried on the grounds of plagiarsim..I won't have a problem if you acknowledge it to me in your blog as well..

Daroga said...

Mohan babu..... too muchh.....!!!!!!
bahut bahut achhi kavita hai.... sach mein... i m speechless !!!!

sushantam said...

@adarsh sab
Dhanyawad .. :)
Aur likhenge hum abhi...keep reading..

Total Chaos said...

dua hai humari...dil ka aashiyan khali na rahe kabhi tumhara...jis pyyar bhare dil se likhi hai yeh kavita...woh pyyar bhara dil tode na yeh zamana

Mayank said...

WOW!! WOW!!! WOW!!!!
Two years with such a wonderful poet, and I had no idea of this pleasure that I've had! Extremely impressive!
I have a suggestion...forward the link to as many beautiful ladies as you can, and then see the magic. Oh, but before you do that, do write somewhere on your blog that you are single and that the position of Mohan's "My Girl" is vacant.
One more thing...if possible, change the background color of the blog, bcoz u wrote- "You are fairer than the paper I am writing upon"
:D HEHE

Am looking forward to more of such works of art from U.

sushantam said...

Thanks verma for such wonderful comments and suggestions the last one will be heeded to asap!!

Also the title of my post "I walk alone.." says it all about my single status..I am waiting for the "right" girl to comprehend it...May this happen soon!!! Amen..

I hope I will live upto your expectations with my future posts. :)

Unknown said...

kuch kavita likhein hain mohan babu!! God level..hum halu ho gaye padhke :)

sushantam said...

@anjali
Thanks... :D

Nishant Kumar said...

"A soul parallel to yours is impossible to find,
With a body so tender yet strong in the mind;
When I behold you I have my senses gone,
You are fairer than the paper I am writing upon;"

These were the defining moments in your poem (I only hope that this is the one time where you haven't engaged in the cut/copy/paste business :P)

Looks like we had a poet amongst us and we, the ignorant fools never honored him .. we have an occassion though .. treat's due ... maybe, you could come prepared with some more of these ... and they shall be amply rewarded in the the typical kgp style :P

Kudos!!
Nunnu

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sushantam said...

Thanks for the appreciation nano!! (I can assure u that is not cut-copy-paste)...
These were figments of imagination when I was young i.e in school...[:P]..Its only that I am maiking them public now..the IIT has killed the poet..:(..so I may not be able to come up with something during treat...I am not responsible ,IIT is...;)

Unknown said...

Super like Sush !! Loved it ....